Wednesday, May 27, 2009

Final Assessment

Dear Yanai,
Unfortunately you didn't finish all the assignments. You need to take more care with your writing because you have MANY spelling mistakes and some grammar mistakes. Try writing in WORD using spell check and grammar check and then copy-paste into the BLOG, or get someone to help you as I suggested earlier.
Your final grade is 65.
Yours,
Karen Noll Stanger

Sunday, May 24, 2009

Diary

Charly Brown's diary-
december 13- I'm realy bammed about the sittiutun, i am a big blach, i don't sucsseed anything.
I fail everything and i can't stand my life any more.
December 30- I was realy beesy and i coudn't write my diary, but any way i'm back and unhappy. I just got known today that i'm going to have a baby sister.
January 15- My mom i 6 mounth pregnennt already, and i'm continuing to do everything to stop from my mother to have the baby.
March 15- My mother gave birth today to a girl baby.

Sunday, May 17, 2009

The Ending

A diffrent ending for the book is that Charly Brown doesn't come back on time for the game, he missess the and of it, and he's team loses.