Dear Yanai,
Unfortunately you didn't finish all the assignments. You need to take more care with your writing because you have MANY spelling mistakes and some grammar mistakes. Try writing in WORD using spell check and grammar check and then copy-paste into the BLOG, or get someone to help you as I suggested earlier.
Your final grade is 65.
Yours,
Karen Noll Stanger
Wednesday, May 27, 2009
Sunday, May 24, 2009
Diary
Charly Brown's diary-
december 13- I'm realy bammed about the sittiutun, i am a big blach, i don't sucsseed anything.
I fail everything and i can't stand my life any more.
December 30- I was realy beesy and i coudn't write my diary, but any way i'm back and unhappy. I just got known today that i'm going to have a baby sister.
January 15- My mom i 6 mounth pregnennt already, and i'm continuing to do everything to stop from my mother to have the baby.
March 15- My mother gave birth today to a girl baby.
december 13- I'm realy bammed about the sittiutun, i am a big blach, i don't sucsseed anything.
I fail everything and i can't stand my life any more.
December 30- I was realy beesy and i coudn't write my diary, but any way i'm back and unhappy. I just got known today that i'm going to have a baby sister.
January 15- My mom i 6 mounth pregnennt already, and i'm continuing to do everything to stop from my mother to have the baby.
March 15- My mother gave birth today to a girl baby.
Sunday, May 17, 2009
The Ending
A diffrent ending for the book is that Charly Brown doesn't come back on time for the game, he missess the and of it, and he's team loses.
Sunday, April 26, 2009
The setting
The story takes place in lots of places, for exempel: the story takes place in lots of times on the wall that Charly brown likes to stand in front of it. There are some pictures in he book of the setting, but i coudn't get it on the blog, so you nee to open up the link in order to see a picture of the setting http://static.tvguide.com/MediaBin/Galleries/Shows/A_F/Ca_Ch/CharlieBrown_Christmas/charlie-brown-christmas7.jpg . Three descriptions of objects are: 1. the Doghouse of snoopy, and it's important beceuse snoopy is allways seein laying on it. 2.
Sunday, April 19, 2009
The main charechter of my book
The main charachter of my book is Charly Brown, and his aperance is whene his trying to bild a Bird House. The charchters of Charly brown are sadnnes and mizery. The main character is involved in the sory by bying the main chacter and having conections with the other characters. I found a few website about the book there they are http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charlie_Brown and more websites http://comics.com/peanuts an another one http://www.retrojunk.com/details_tvshows/688-charlie-brown---snoopy-show/.
Sunday, March 29, 2009
The Author of my book
The author of my book is Charls monreo Shulz . Charles was known as an american caroonist aspeciely thanks to his peanut comic books.
Charles monreo Shulz was born on november 26 1992 in minasoeta and died on februery 12 2000 in.
Names of other books that this author wrote are "young pillars" and "It's only a game". T he genger of books that this author wrote are comic books. The audiences of charlez m. schalz are people in all- ages. The author of my book has a site http://www.schulzmuseum.org/
More web sites that there are http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charles_Schulz and http://www.librarything.com/author/schulzcharlesm and http://connection.ebscohost.com/content/article/1020294051.html;jsessionid=88D7413049E53A29457180AA28B69AB2.ehctc1
Charles monreo Shulz was born on november 26 1992 in minasoeta and died on februery 12 2000 in.
Names of other books that this author wrote are "young pillars" and "It's only a game". T he genger of books that this author wrote are comic books. The audiences of charlez m. schalz are people in all- ages. The author of my book has a site http://www.schulzmuseum.org/
More web sites that there are http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charles_Schulz and http://www.librarything.com/author/schulzcharlesm and http://connection.ebscohost.com/content/article/1020294051.html;jsessionid=88D7413049E53A29457180AA28B69AB2.ehctc1
Tuesday, March 17, 2009
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